Welcome
back! I'm continuing with the next part of my work-in-progress, tentatively
titled Sunlight and Shadows:
Brad
Carmichael buckled his daughter into the back seat and gave her another hug
before closing the door. His heart still beat furiously as he thought about the
danger his little girl could have been in if the lady at the quilt shop hadn’t
taken her in and called him. How could he have been so irresponsible? He’d
known what time the party was over, but he’d gotten engrossed in the task of
finding parents to chaperone the high school band’s trip to the festival next
week, and the time had slipped away.
Starting
up the car, he checked his rear-view mirror. His little miracle sat quietly in
her car seat, content to gaze out the window.
“How
was the party, Princess?”
She
looked up and connected her gaze with his in the mirror. Her grin showed the
gap between her teeth and he felt his lips lift in an answering smile. “It was
fun, Daddy. We played games and stuff. And we had ice cream and cake.”
“Sounds
good. Were all your friends there?”
“Yes.
Sherry, and Callie and Bethanie…”
Brad
smiled and let the girl chatter while he navigated the car toward their home.
He and Lynn had made plans to buy a bigger home and expand their family, but
now he was glad they hadn’t moved from the tiny bungalow. Upkeep on a bigger
house would have been a greater expense and more effort to maintain, and right
now his time and money were stretched to the limit.
“Daddy?”
“What,
Princess?”
“Where
are we going?”
“We’re
going home to have supper. Why?”
“Because
we passed our house already.”
Rats.
Daydreaming again. He turned the car around in the nearest driveway. If his
daughter hadn’t been on the ball, there was no telling when he would have
realized where he was going. He might have ended up in the next county.
Spotting a family smorgassboard type restaurant, he pulled into the lot.
“Princess,
I changed my mind. If I start cooking when we get home it’s going to be late by
the time we eat. So would it be okay with you if we eat here tonight?”
Jennie’s
eyes lit up. “Okay, Daddy. I like their chicken. And they have corn with butter
and stuff on it. And mashed potatoes and applesauce…”
The
rest of jennie’s list faded away as Brad opened his door and got out. He went
to the back seat to unbuckle his princess, who continued to name off her
“favorites.”
“…And
can I have chocolate ice cream with chocolate sauce for dessert, Daddy?”
“Sure
Princess. Anything you want.”
He’d
be a good dad and make a home cooked dinner for his daughter some other night.
Right now he just needed to get them both fed. One of these days he’d get
caught up, and then he could think about nutritious dinners. In the meantime,
they’d have to make do with someone else's cooking.
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for stopping by! Please leave a comment to let me know what you think about
Brad and the others in this story. Is he believable, or too syrupy? Be sure to
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This guy and his frantic distraction strike close to home for me. Beautifully described, Patricia.
ReplyDeleteLove the way you painted both his devotion and his burden. I felt the heaviness of responsibility on him as well as his delight in his daughter. Beautifully done, as usual, Patty.
ReplyDeleteYou did a fantastic job of making him a sympathetic character. I bet there's not a parent alive who can't relate to this! :c)
ReplyDeleteReading about Brad brought back memories of similar distracted moments when my two were little. I could "feel" his thoughts, so I'd say you are doing a great job with this!
ReplyDeleteThis is such a sweet loving story.
ReplyDeleteHe sounds like a good dad.
ReplyDeleteVery sweet sample! I really like this story so far, and Brad's character.
ReplyDelete"One of these days he'd get caught up..." Boy, can't we all identify with that! Nice job, Patricia. Sounds like a great story.
ReplyDeleteYou did a terrific job of showing Brad's frazzled mind-set and concern for his daughter. Yep, he needs a woman in his life. :-)
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