Sunday, February 16, 2014

Snippet Sunday

          Here’s another snippet from my Valentine short story, “Operation Rhombus,” which is included in Love and Diamonds, an Astraea Press Anthology just out last week.

          Selecting her items took only a few minutes, and she turned toward the check out lane when her cart nearly collided with that of Lilah Bedford, the Home Ec teacher. 
          "Hello there, Ellie. Where's Paul?" 
          "He's out of town, picking up supplies for something called Operation Rhombus." 
          "Operation — oh yes, I heard about that. Great idea. I hope he's successful with it. Well, I've got to go. See you on Monday!" 
          Why has everyone else heard about Operation Rhombus except me? she wondered. 


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8 comments:

  1. I love Elli's growing frustration---and it's totally worth it in the end! :)

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  2. Great way to get the reader intrigued about what he's up to!

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  3. Great tease. Now I definitely need to know what he's up to.

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  4. I'd be wondering that myself by now, and be somewhat annoyed as well! Great snippet!

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