Friday, April 12, 2013

Sweet Saturday

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Welcome back! I'm still hard at work on the sequel to my samurai story, tentatively titled The Plum Blossom Covenant. Last week, we met the hero, Yasahiro Tanaka, as he returned to his homeland after several years in America. This week, we join his parents, Hiro and Hanako Tanaka, the main characters in The Samurai's Garden:
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"Do you see it?  Over there, to the left."
Hanako Tanaka squinted and peered in the direction her husband pointed.  Lately, she'd had more and more trouble seeing things at a distance. Could she really be aged enough that her eyes were failing? Hopefully, she would not have to wear spectacles. It would be so embarrassing.
"I can make out the sails now! Surely it won’t be too much longer." Hiromasa’s voice rose with excitement, and Hanako's heart beat faster, both with excitement and with the thrill of being Hiro's wife. After all these years, her heart still fluttered each time she looked at the tall, strong former samurai who had swept into her life and made her world complete. At fifty-three, he still made an imposing figure. She'd noticed the admiring gazes of several other women. It happened everywhere they went. Her handsome husband stayed fit through hard work on the farm. But it was his intelligence and willingness to try new innovations that made Tanaka Farms a great success.
"Patience, Hiro," she reminded him. "Wishes won’t make the ship travel any faster."
They had traveled to the main island so they could meet Yasa’s ship. They'd been apprehensive about taking the train, but thanks to the new railroads traversing the country, the trip had only taken a fraction of the time it used to. They both missed him terribly and wanted to be reunited with him as soon as possible.
Hiro smiled at her now and put an arm around her. "You are right as always, my little flower. I must learn to be more patient. Our son will arrive when he arrives." He squeezed her harder. "But I have missed him so."
Heedless of the stares they garnered at their public display of affection, she turned toward him. She reached around to squeeze him back, reveling in the sheer power contained in his yukata.
"I have missed him, too," she reminded him. "But you told him he needed to go."
He chuckled. "Yes, it was my fault. Are you angry about that?"
"No, not at all.  I understand why he needed to go. Other than the visits we made to Tokyo, and the years he spent at the University in Sapporo, he never knew about life outside our village. If he is to be a leader, like his father, he had to learn more about the world.  So each day I went to the temple and prayed for his safety. And each day I felt better about him. He will be a well-educated, strong leader, like his father."
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14 comments:

  1. I have a story about the son of my former hero and heroine. It's fun to follow the family, isn't it?

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    1. Yes, Elaine, it's good to revisit them and know that that their Happily Ever After really worked out! Thanks for stopping in.

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  2. Love shared by two slightly older folks is so refreshing and delightful. Great excerpt, Patty.

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    1. Thanks, Jean! Somehow I'm more comfortable writing about older characters. It's been too long since I was young, I guess.

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  3. Great excerpt Patty! This is going to be a great story, I can tell!

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  4. Wonderful excerpt. I like the clear affection between them, even at their age. It's lovely :)

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    1. Thanks, Sarah! I enjoyed this couple's story so much I couldn't bear to let them go!

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  5. I like the scene a lot ... and their warm relationship.
    A bit puzzled, though about the timeframe. Is this around 1900?

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    1. It's right around there, Jeff. The Samurai's Garden took place in the 1870s, so this is twenty-five or so years later. I should probably point that out next time. Thanks for visiting!

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  6. I love the Japanese historical setting, and the relationship between husband and wife. It's such a nice change of pace to see an older couple in a romance, even if they're not the leading couple.

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    1. Thanks, Carrie-Anne! They've been fun to write about.

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  7. Nice job, Patty! I think the title for this novel is lovely, too!

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    1. Thank you, Stephanie! It's unusual to have a good working title.

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