Welcome
back! I'm sharing another scene from The Samurai's Garden, scheduled for release in November at
Astraea Press. This scene is a flashback. Hiro, a former samurai now working on
a tiny farm in northern Japan, remembers how his famous warrior father taught
him about compassion:
The
tiny kitten lay on the roadside, injured and abandoned. Ten-year old Hiro
couldn't leave the animal in the road to die, so he brought her home, cleaned
her up, and nursed her back to health. He found an old basket, lined it with a
soft blanket, and hid the kitten in his room. Each day, after completing his
studies and exercises, he sneaked back to his room, gently petting the fur ball
and crooning to her softly. Always a dutiful son, he was careful to complete
his tasks before indulging himself in the luxury of cuddling with his pet.
One
day, the kitten fell ill. Hiro’s heart ached for the tiny being as she lay
listlessly, refusing to eat, not wanting to play. He feared for the kitten’s
life, but didn’t know how to help her. Chores were done quickly, and he hurried
back to his room to check on his charge. He sat on his ofuton, gently petting her, when the shoji screen opened and his father walked
in. In his hand was a piece of armor. Hiro had been instructed to polish the
headpiece, but the lack of shine attested to his carelessness. Hiro looked up,
up, up at the man he loved and feared more than any other. Not only had he
failed in his duty, he was harboring a pet. What would the great samurai do? Could
he stand by and watch his father callously discard the kitten?
He
clutched the kitten to his chest, trembling. The pet squirmed, but thankfully
remained quiet, as if understanding that her fate lay in this powerful man’s
hand. Hiro struggled to contain the tears that filled his eyes and fought to
keep from pleading for the mercy he knew would not come. Duty came first to a
samurai. There was no time for the frivolity of pets.
And
then the great warrior spoke. Hiro mentally prepared himself for the lashing he
knew would follow.
"I
wondered about the noises I heard coming from this room when you weren’t home.
But you have not come here during the day before now. What caused you to
abandon your duties today?"
Hiro’s
heart held to a thread of hope. Was it possible that his warrior father
understood? He struggled to find his voice. "F-forgive me, otousan. She — she seems ill. She is not
eating."
Otousan said nothing, but one brow raised. He
held out his hand and waited.
Dutifully,
Hiro handed over the kitten, though his hands trembled, and he feared he might
drop her. Otousan
took the tiny bundle in his large hands and examined her closely. "It
appears she has a cold. See, her eyes are watering, and her breathing seems
labored. Let’s see if we can help her." He turned and strode to the ofuro, the bath area with Hiro following
closely on his heels.
In the
hot, steamy room, Otousan
lay the kitten on a soft, clean towel. Gradually, the kitten settled in, her
breathing calmed. Hiro’s anxiety also eased as he realized she was going to be
all right.
Father
and son brought the pet back to Hiro’s room to rest. "You should bring her
back to the ofuro three
or four times each day to clear out her lungs." He turned a stern eye
toward his son. "Of course you will do this in between your chores and
lessons." Hiro nodded in understanding. "And now that she is resting
comfortably, you can return to polishing this armor properly."
Hiro
bowed low, thanking the gods he would not be punished today. "Yes,
Otousan. I will polish
until it gleams."
The
beloved pet had lived until Hiro left for the university, and he never forgot
his father’s compassion that day. He had learned it was possible to be both a
fierce samurai and to have a tender heart. And he realized that strength used
to care for a weaker being showed a greater nobility than strength used to take
from those who could not fight back.
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What a wise lesson to learn. Great excerpt.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Elaine.
DeleteThese characters are so real! You've done a great job of showing the relationship between father and son, as well as let the reader know how Hiro spends his days. A beautiful scene.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Sandy!
DeleteThat feeling of wanting to do something for someone who is sick, but there's nothing to do but make them comfortable. :( Love how the father is compassionate but still holds Hiro responsible for his work.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Leah. Good fathers generally raise more good fathers.
DeleteLovely excerpt! I really like Hiro's father and how he balances a warrior instinct with a gentle heart.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Carrie-Anne!
DeleteI am so intrigued by this story and can't wait to read the book when it comes out! Your characters are so alive!!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Ruth!
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