Welcome back! I have another scene from Sunlight
and Shadows,
my work-in-progress:
The shop was closed for the evening, so she could work
on her project without being interrupted by customers. A knock on the door
startled her. She looked up to see a familiar little face looking in and
smiling. Her lips curved in an answering smile and she walked over to open the door.
"Hello, Jennie. What brings you here this
evening?"
"Hi, Sophie. Daddy and I got a pizza for
supper."
"Where is your Daddy?"
"He's right there." Jennie pointed to the
car parked in front of the pizzeria. Brad stood next to the car, talking to
another man. "He's talking to one of the band parents, and I saw your
store's light was on and I wanted to say hi."
“That’s very nice of you. But does he know you came
down here?”
"Jennie? Where are you?" Brad's anxious
voice rang out. That answered her question.
"I'm right here, Daddy. I made sure I could
always see you."
“I’m glad you did, Princess. I got really worried
when I didn’t see you.”
Sophie's heart warmed to hear the exchange. Brad
didn't sound angry, but his concern when he didn't see his daughter was evident,
as well as his relief at finding her. As much as she grieved over the daughter
she had lost, in a way it was probably better that the child had never been
born. If she had, she would have been doomed to a life of constant criticism,
and fear of not measuring up. She wouldn't have known what it was like to have
friends, to express herself freely, play happily, and explore. She would have
been as miserable as her mother had been. Maybe it was for the best the baby had
never lived to experience such pain and suffering.
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Jennie sounds like an independent little girl. :)
ReplyDeleteJennie seems like quite a precocious child.
ReplyDeleteI hope nothing bad happens to her!
*sniffles* It's so heartbreaking she feels this way. I bet by the end of the book her mind--and heart--will be full of much happier thoughts!
ReplyDeleteJennie is a doll.
ReplyDeleteI love Jennie! Child characters in a non-children's book can be so fun.
ReplyDeleteNice interaction, Patricia! I love that Brad is tender with his daughter.
ReplyDeleteI would advise that you check your MS for "pet" words. You have two instances of "so" in the first paragraph (and a missing "she"). I have to watch out for "just" and a couple other words that crop up so much I think they lie in wait to launch themselves onto the keyboard. :-)
Duly noted, Marsha. I normally check my excerpts more carefully before uploading. Guess I was in a hurry this week. I'll edit when I get home from the conference in Chicago.
DeletePatty,
ReplyDeleteThis story is really good. Quite a departure from your Samurai stories. I love that you're weaving your love of quilting into this new story. Looks like we're both off on different adventures!
We really have to get together soon!!!
~ Marti