Welcome! I have
another short sample from my historical novel. Hiro, a former samurai soldier,
has come to Hanako's farm in northern Japan and offered to help her for the
season. Here, he is fishing in the stream behind her home:
He
found a sturdy old tree with a thick branch overhanging the stream. Carefully inching out on the branch, he
found that it could accommodate his weight, and lay face down along its
length. He waited, his sword
poised and ready for his prey. The
rippling water played a calming melody, and the shade from the rest of the tree
enveloped him in a blanket of security that he hadn’t experienced in years.
As a warrior in the
elite forces of the bushido, he had not known serenity, only anger and
death. What would it be like to
live in peace and beauty, instead of constant pain and needless bloodshed?
A
splash in the water below reminded him of his task. A school of carp, making its way upstream, swam into his
vantage point. Drawing on his
survival training, he lowered his sword, spearing the largest of the group. Quickly he raised and lowered the sword
again and again, until the still-moving fish covered half his blade.
The
water beneath him turned murky, and his arm froze as the haunting memory of
another time, another knife, overtook him. His stomach churned as he remembered a man he had known all
his life, one he loved and revered, dying by his own hand. Though Hiro had fought nobly and had
observed the death of many, this time it had brought him to his knees. It was then that he knew he could not
continue as a warrior.
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You always take us into the most enchanting worlds, Pat! Love this one. And the last sentence makes me beg you to post more next week :) Thanks so much for sharing!
ReplyDeleteWow! This is powerful. Excellent job!
ReplyDeleteSo many wonderful emotional connections here. Amazing. Brought tears to my eyes.
ReplyDeleteWhat a powerful sample, and I loved this - "The rippling water played a calming melody, "
ReplyDeleteWhat a swordsman! I hope he can find love to brighten his life. Why do I think he will? Beautifully written, Patty.
ReplyDeleteI love ow you were able to bring the past and present together with such a simple act like fishing
ReplyDeleteIntriguing sample, Patty. Hope to see more next week!
ReplyDeleteLucy
I love the descriptions you use, and your samurai's voice. He sounds like a really interesting character.
ReplyDeleteI can't wait for you to finish this so I can read the book. ;-)
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