Welcome back! I'm sharing another excerpt from The
Legacy, my very
first publication at Astraea Press. Leigh Becker is returning to her parents'
home after a visit to the Tanaka home:
The house was dark. Hopefully, both her parents had gone
to bed. Life was much simpler when she didn't have to talk to either of them.
Mom was always so distracted, so focused on her career. And Dad was ...
unpredictable. Sometimes he was morose, bemoaning the cards he had been dealt.
The unfairness, the sadness, the impossible odds he faced. And other times he would
lash out, finding fault with everyone and everything. Leigh didn’t blame her
mother for immersing herself in work. But that often left Leigh alone with—
"It's about time you got home. Did you forget where
you lived? Or were you practicing shacking up with that Jap kid?"
Oh no. He was awake, drunk, and mean. Not a good
combination. She held on to the door handle, thankful she hadn’t come all the
way in. Though Frank had never hurt her, she didn’t want to find out what he
was capable of.
"Where's mom?"
"Took off on another business trip. I'll bet that
'business' includes some young dude with a fancy suit and an expense
account."
Time to go. "I'll be right back, Dad."
Quickly, she scrambled out the door and tore across the
lawn, around the thick hedges separating their yard from the neighbor's. She
heard her father calling her from the front door. Thank goodness for the
darkness. She ran along the hedge toward the neighbor's backyard.
From
past experience, she knew there was an opening in the back hedge through which
she could squeeze into another backyard and over to the next street. From
there, she could walk over to Main Street, and then to the Shadyside Motel.
Hopefully Jenna would be working the desk tonight.
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Oh, wow, I'll bet there's an intriguing history between Leigh and her parents. The red flags are flaring for me right now!
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing...and for visiting my blog.
Leigh's stepfather definitely has some issues. Thanks for stopping by!
DeleteSometimes we just need to escape and avoid. I don't blame her for running away.
ReplyDeleteLeigh is definitely a survivor. Thanks for stopping, Jen!
DeleteCan't wait to learn more about Leigh's story!
ReplyDeleteI'll probably share a little more next week. Thanks for stopping, Michele!
DeleteLeigh sounds like a strong character. I'm glad she didn't stay and take whatever her father was going to dish out (verbally or otherwise). Good for her!
ReplyDeleteYes, Leigh is a strong woman - the kind we like to write about! Thanks for stopping, Heather.
DeleteGreat post Patty! I love those strong female characters! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Lisa! Yes, wimpy women are boring. So glad you stopped in!
DeletePowerful scene, Patty.
ReplyDeleteI've just "met" Leigh and already, I'm hurting for her.
Thanks, Jeff. Some of the scenes in this story were a little difficult to write. So glad you stopped in!
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