Friday, July 12, 2013

Sweet Saturday: The Legacy #2


Welcome back! I'm sharing another excerpt from The Legacy, my very first publication at Astraea Press. Leigh Becker is returning to her parents' home after a visit to the Tanaka home:

The house was dark. Hopefully, both her parents had gone to bed. Life was much simpler when she didn't have to talk to either of them. Mom was always so distracted, so focused on her career. And Dad was ... unpredictable. Sometimes he was morose, bemoaning the cards he had been dealt. The unfairness, the sadness, the impossible odds he faced. And other times he would lash out, finding fault with everyone and everything. Leigh didn’t blame her mother for immersing herself in work. But that often left Leigh alone with—
"It's about time you got home. Did you forget where you lived? Or were you practicing shacking up with that Jap kid?"
Oh no. He was awake, drunk, and mean. Not a good combination. She held on to the door handle, thankful she hadn’t come all the way in. Though Frank had never hurt her, she didn’t want to find out what he was capable of.
"Where's mom?"
"Took off on another business trip. I'll bet that 'business' includes some young dude with a fancy suit and an expense account."
Time to go. "I'll be right back, Dad."
Quickly, she scrambled out the door and tore across the lawn, around the thick hedges separating their yard from the neighbor's. She heard her father calling her from the front door. Thank goodness for the darkness. She ran along the hedge toward the neighbor's backyard.
From past experience, she knew there was an opening in the back hedge through which she could squeeze into another backyard and over to the next street. From there, she could walk over to Main Street, and then to the Shadyside Motel. Hopefully Jenna would be working the desk tonight.
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Thanks for stopping by! The Legacy is one of July's choices for the Astraea Press Book Club, so you can get it FREE by joining the Book Club's through its Facebook page and then emailing the club coordinator. At the end of the month I'll be on hand to answer any questions you might have!

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12 comments:

  1. Oh, wow, I'll bet there's an intriguing history between Leigh and her parents. The red flags are flaring for me right now!

    Thanks for sharing...and for visiting my blog.

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    1. Leigh's stepfather definitely has some issues. Thanks for stopping by!

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  2. Sometimes we just need to escape and avoid. I don't blame her for running away.

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    1. Leigh is definitely a survivor. Thanks for stopping, Jen!

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  3. Can't wait to learn more about Leigh's story!

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    1. I'll probably share a little more next week. Thanks for stopping, Michele!

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  4. Leigh sounds like a strong character. I'm glad she didn't stay and take whatever her father was going to dish out (verbally or otherwise). Good for her!

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    1. Yes, Leigh is a strong woman - the kind we like to write about! Thanks for stopping, Heather.

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  5. Great post Patty! I love those strong female characters! :)

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    1. Thanks, Lisa! Yes, wimpy women are boring. So glad you stopped in!

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  6. Powerful scene, Patty.
    I've just "met" Leigh and already, I'm hurting for her.

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    1. Thanks, Jeff. Some of the scenes in this story were a little difficult to write. So glad you stopped in!

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