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Welcome
back! I have been sharing scenes from one of my current works-in-progress, a
Japanese historical I'm calling The Plum Blossom Covenant. It is the beginning of the twentieth century, and
Yasahiro Tanaka has returned to his native Japan after having spent four years
in America. His parents have met him at the harbor. And by a twist of fate, a
woman who broke his heart is now living in Tokyo. He finally has a chance to
speak with her about what happened:
Yasa
held back as the women went ahead. He noticed Yumiko doing the same, and took
the opportunity to talk to her again.
"Do
you plan to work for these ladies? Will you stay with them, or will they return
to America?"
Yumi
was slow to answer. "I don’t work for them, exactly. I work for the
WTCU."
"And
after the conference? What will
you do then?"
"I—don't
know."
Yasa
sighed. "I searched for you, you know. I looked everywhere. No one would
tell me where you had gone."
"No
one knew."
He
stared at her. "You didn’t tell your parents where you went?"
"No.
I—couldn't. I didn’t tell anyone."
"Yumi—"
"It
was better that way. I had to get away and I didn’t want you or anyone else to
become involved. It’s better this way. I have built a life here. You can move
on with yours."
"My
life was supposed to include you."
She
bowed her head. "I know. I’m—sorry."
They
walked in silence for a few minutes, heedless of the excited chatter ahead of
them. Suddenly, Yasa stopped.
"I
could stay here."
Yumiko
stopped, too. Not because he stopped, but because she was so startled her feet
refused to move. "No!"
"You
don’t want me here?"
"No,
it’s not that, but — you would do that for me?"
"I
might, if I understood what it is about Furano that keeps you so far
away."
Yumi
hesitated. Could she tell
him? It would be so nice to get this
out, to share the burden of her knowledge. But she couldn’t. If he knew, it could hurt him. She had
to keep it to herself.
"Were
you that impatient? You knew I had only one more term to finish at the college.
I promised I would come back to you, and I did — but you were gone," Yasa
persisted.
"I—I
know. I’m sorry." She knew her apology was so inadequate, but it was all
she could do. She walked on, hanging her head in misery.
Yasa’s
next words to her made the pain worse. "I am sorry, too. I must have done
something, or not been the man you wanted me to be, if you cannot abide even
living on the same island as me. There is nothing left for me to do but return
to Hokkaido and work with my father." He walked ahead then, joining his
family.
If
only you knew, she thought. You
are everything I ever wanted, but can never have.
****
Thanks
for stopping by! Several other authors are sharing excerpts from their works
today, and their links can be found at Sweet Saturday Samples. Be sure to check
them out!
If
you want to read the story of Yasa's parents, please check out The Samurai's
Garden. Only $2.99 at your favorite
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Musings from the creative life of Patricia Kiyono, author/crafter/seamstress/procrastinator
Friday, May 10, 2013
Sweet Saturday: Plum Blossom Covenant #5
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Her secret must be pretty big if it's keeping her from him.
ReplyDeleteIt's definitely big to her, Elaine. Thanks for stopping in!
DeleteOh, I want to know her secret! Great excerpt. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, EA! But I can't give away the ending.
DeleteI'm curious too. Love your storytelling style.:)
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Jennifer!
DeleteSuch a sweet, poignant scene. I'm hoping she finds the courage to tell him.
ReplyDeleteShe will, eventually. But they have to go through a few more trials first!
DeleteI can feel his despair. She needs to put him out of his misery.
ReplyDeleteYes, she does.
DeleteOooh. My heart breaks for her! Fantastic excerpt. Definitely makes me want to read more.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Heather!
DeleteI want to thump her noggin and say, "Just tell him, for heaven's sake!"
ReplyDeleteHa! I'm sure you do, Jeff. But she has good reasons for keeping quiet. At least they're good reasons in her mind.
DeleteWhat a sad choice...I wonder if she can change things. Thanks for sharing...and for visiting my blog.
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