tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3797770643290331847.post4668562199973918414..comments2023-12-26T04:13:15.906-05:00Comments on Creative Hodgepodge: Sweet SaturdayPatricia Kiyonohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14763838993363110626noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3797770643290331847.post-33375378633967562532012-05-04T22:10:32.170-04:002012-05-04T22:10:32.170-04:00Patty,
This story is really good. Quite a departur...Patty,<br />This story is really good. Quite a departure from your Samurai stories. I love that you're weaving your love of quilting into this new story. Looks like we're both off on different adventures!<br /><br />We really have to get together soon!!!<br />~ MartiStephanie Michelshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10389753181677671547noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3797770643290331847.post-65420525342795445812012-04-29T08:25:34.852-04:002012-04-29T08:25:34.852-04:00Duly noted, Marsha. I normally check my excerpts m...Duly noted, Marsha. I normally check my excerpts more carefully before uploading. Guess I was in a hurry this week. I'll edit when I get home from the conference in Chicago.Patricia Kiyonohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14763838993363110626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3797770643290331847.post-44921605775194692472012-04-28T23:10:34.097-04:002012-04-28T23:10:34.097-04:00Nice interaction, Patricia! I love that Brad is te...Nice interaction, Patricia! I love that Brad is tender with his daughter.<br /><br />I would advise that you check your MS for "pet" words. You have two instances of "so" in the first paragraph (and a missing "she"). I have to watch out for "just" and a couple other words that crop up so much I think they lie in wait to launch themselves onto the keyboard. :-)Marsha Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15389060049107102815noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3797770643290331847.post-57071692028230349682012-04-28T22:51:05.458-04:002012-04-28T22:51:05.458-04:00I love Jennie! Child characters in a non-children...I love Jennie! Child characters in a non-children's book can be so fun.Carrie-Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05810154378449825641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3797770643290331847.post-63408517551417151492012-04-28T18:53:14.018-04:002012-04-28T18:53:14.018-04:00Jennie is a doll.Jennie is a doll.Lindsayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07716003019499843582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3797770643290331847.post-26713829608189214012012-04-28T13:26:21.970-04:002012-04-28T13:26:21.970-04:00*sniffles* It's so heartbreaking she feels thi...*sniffles* It's so heartbreaking she feels this way. I bet by the end of the book her mind--and heart--will be full of much happier thoughts!Sarah Ballancehttp://sarahballance.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3797770643290331847.post-10591785272386483222012-04-28T12:30:53.369-04:002012-04-28T12:30:53.369-04:00Jennie seems like quite a precocious child.
I hop...Jennie seems like quite a precocious child. <br />I hope nothing bad happens to her!Sandra Allenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05246424098015549007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3797770643290331847.post-6224082547663724972012-04-28T11:39:18.793-04:002012-04-28T11:39:18.793-04:00Jennie sounds like an independent little girl. :)Jennie sounds like an independent little girl. :)Rachel Rossanohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12984724805729525522noreply@blogger.com